And for my next trick, I will to create a story out-loud, before your eyes and under the noses of everyone to see!
In February, I wrote a response to The Daily Prompt about cloning myself. Click here to read the original post. At the end I wrote this:
Wait–a writer who is convinced her writer’s block is due to her life getting in the way of her work has two Chloes created and learns the true problem is she needs to stop hiding in her writing and embrace life–that sounds like a good story. A comedy. Maybe even a romantic comedy. Oh, this one’s going in the file!
I am doing it. Using Pixar’s 22 Rules I will develop this story out-loud on this blog. It will be the slowest rollercoaster ride ever–just kidding. I do not know what it will be because I have never done this before. These “Rules” are not in any order and there are a few I do not understand, but what the heck, off the cliff I leap!
Pixar’s 22 Rules of Storytelling
In 2011, story artist Emma Coats tweeted a series of story guidelines gleaned from her work at Pixar. They are little jewels of storytelling wisdom.
1. You admire a character for trying more than for their successes.
2. You gotta keep in mind what is interesting to you as an audience, not what is fun to do as a writer. They can be very different.
3. Trying for theme is important, but you will not see what the story is actually about until you are at the end of it. Now rewrite.
4. Once upon a time there was ___. Every day, ___. One day ___. Because of that, ___. Because of that, ___. Until finally ___.
5. Simplify. Focus. Combine characters. Hop over detours. You will feel like you are losing valuable stuff but it sets you free.
6. What is your character good at, comfortable with? Throw the polar opposite at them. Challenge them. How do they deal?
7. Come up with your ending before you figure out your middle. Seriously. Endings are hard, get yours working up front.
8. Finish your story, let go even if it is not perfect. In an ideal world you have both, but move on. Do better next time.
9. When you are stuck, make a list of what WOULDN’T happen next. Lots of times the material to get you unstuck will show up.
10. Pull apart the stories you like. What you like in them is a part of you; you have got to recognize it before you can use it.
11. Putting it on paper lets you start fixing it. If it stays in your head, a perfect idea, you will never share it with anyone.
12. Discount the 1st thing that comes to mind. And the 2nd, 3rd, 4th, 5th – get the obvious out of the way. Surprise yourself.
13. Give your characters opinions. Passive/malleable might seem likeable to you as you write, but it is poison to the audience.
14. Why must you tell THIS story? What’s the belief burning within you that your story feeds off of? That’s the heart of it.
15. If you were your character, in this situation, how would you feel? Honesty lends credibility to unbelievable situations.
16. What are the stakes? Give us reason to root for the character. What happens if they don’t succeed? Stack the odds against.
17. No work is ever wasted. If it is not working, let go and move on – it will come back around to be useful later.
18. You have to know yourself: the difference between doing your best and fussing. Story is testing, not refining.
19. Coincidences to get characters into trouble are great; coincidences to get them out of it are cheating.
20. Exercise: take the building blocks of a movie you dislike. How did you rearrange them into what you DO like?
21. You gotta identify with your situation/characters, cannot just write ‘cool’. What would make YOU act that way?
22. What is the essence of your story? Most economical telling of it? If you know that, you can build out from there.